Thursday, February 11, 2010

Bad blacklist scripts

This is the first year the annual blacklist has meant much to me as an aspiring screenwriter. There was a list of scripts that had been passed over by producers and still garnered enough respect to collect votes for the blacklist. Some of these scripts will make it to film and many will not. But why won't they?

Many of this year's blacklist scripts are available on the internet with a bit of scrounging around, and screenwriters salivate at the chance to get a read of what so many producers liked. It's a big chance to learn about what these producers and bigshots in Hollywood are looking for. But is it really? Is that really what a screenwriter should learn?

One of the things that I learned from the 2009 blacklist was that almost all of the screenplays had been passed over by producers for one or more very specific reasons. For three of the scripts that I read, the reasons became painfully obvious. You could almost hear the reason a producer would give, "Yeah, I like it BUT..." Many believe that the screenplays are passed over for minor reasons such as casting or just not working in the genre. Wrong, there are often much larger and more specific reasons. If you got all the producers that voted on the blacklist in one room, they could quickly come up with a consensus on the flaw or flaws for each screenplay.

My read of some of the blacklist scripts was quite an education into how screenwriters ignore or don't recognize those flaws. The comments that I read from other aspiring screenwriters seemed to be more about how much they liked or didn't like the screenplays. What I didn't see and read was an analysis of what a producer would say after "I like it BUT..." Why had these guys and gals passed on what was otherwise a praiseworthy screenplay?

This is exactly the question you should ask yourself when you create a screenplay. Are you writing something that can be very well written and still get that BUT when it makes its way to producers. Aspiring screenwriters should be reading the screenplays from the annual blacklist and trying their best to identify flaws that put the script on the list. Those screenplays all had flaws, and some of them had huge flaws. A few had huge flaws that would almost certainly prevent the success of the screenplay.

As an aspiring screenwriter laying in a bed with a laptop in Kalamazoo, you're probably thinking that I'm just some cynical douchebag. You might be thinking that I don't have the credentials to be criticizing screenplays on the blacklist. I am smart enough not to get into internet battles over the flaws of screenplays from the blacklist or to give a biting example of a specific flaw. You never know when you'll meet an enemy that you made in the past, even up close and personal.

I'm serious about this critical analysis of the blacklist thing. Don't read the blacklist with glowing admiration that may not be deserved. Learn what you can about why each screenplay was passed on numerous times by the same people. The blacklist isn't necessarily a place you want your screenplay to be. There you are again calling me a stupid wannabe hack from Kalamazoo. Maybe you're right, BUT...

10 comments:

  1. bohzo nikan (hello friend)

    I have been searching for your site, i could not find you. I had to get my father who is a computer expert for the IRS to find you, he did it in about 2 minutes so now i feel dumb.

    I see you found Mr. Mitchell, he is extremely smart when it comes to Potawatomi, i had to get permission to get his writings. I wanted to get his Prairie people to him, i have many of his people on my site and they do not know how to find him. He doesn't like all the publicity, he is not like me, i try to get publicity so ALL Potawatomi can find and hear from the scholars so i have to bring them all together. I feel like a matchmaker.

    Have a great day, now i have to read your blog!

    David

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  2. bohzo nikan,

    Thanks for visiting my blog. I very much enjoy your blog and really think it's a great idea to create a resource for Potawatomi themed items. I've been thinking about what I'd like to write for your blog. I want to make sure that I do a good job with expressing what I learned about the Potawatomi culture and history.

    Scott

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  3. I have read your blog and you are a great writer, i think that you are way to hard on yourself about not being discovered yet.

    Most screenwriters do not get discovered until they are much older, you look young to have reached fame yet.

    Look at the actors and actresses, they really have a hard time with getting into show business.

    A really well done move on the /fort Dearborn massacre would be huge, it is long delayed for such a movie.

    Have a great day!
    David

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  4. Thanks for your kind words. I'm 47 years old and have a back condition that makes me feel about double that sometimes!

    I'll do a bit of reading into Ft. Dearborn and some thinking about what type of story might be there. Historical stuff is awfully difficult to market to Hollywood. Some people's interest stops at the words "period piece".

    I'm surprised that Fort Dearborn wasn't covered in a movie. Look at how many times that other pieces of history have been done again and again. The OK Corral thing has been done a million times.

    I'll try to do some thinking about how a movie based on the history could be done. The Chief White Pigeon was a whole lot easier. One reason was that even today people are being forced from their homes.

    Thanks again for the kind words,
    Scott

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  5. bohzo Scott

    You are correct, chief White Pigeon has a great story to be told, i am surprised that NO movie has really been done on the great Chief White Pigeon.

    I did not tell you everything about me, i am actually related in a very distant way to chief White Pigeon. I have cousins and they still carry his name, they probably would not speak much, but maybe they would.

    The WhitePigeon blog is: http://www.whitepigeonbaskets.com/joo/
    Nancy is like a fourth cousin to me and i have not spoken to her in years, she directly from Chief White Pigeon, her whole family are direct descendants of Chief White Pigeon, my grandmother Lydian Quigno was practically raised by a White Pigeon. My father is close to one of the White Pigeon kids i will ask him to talk to him, it is Nancy's brother, Levi Rickert, also a cousin

    Have a great day!
    David

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  6. Actually, I had lunch with Levi and he read my movie script. He had some ideas on what to possibly do with it.

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  7. bohzo

    You are very correct in the mob being alive and well in all forms of gaming, from slot machines to casino management.

    My casino, "Four Winds Casino Resort" makes $400 million a year and my cut from that is $95 a month. The tribe pays 40% for the loan and salaries for those managing the casino. We have 135 tribal employees out of nearly 1,800 employees.

    Levi does not get much for his casino. Organized crime, you bet, the last people to ever get profits are the very people that the casino was designed for. They are the ones trying to get horse racing tracks up.

    My tribal council and chairman are all very good people. It is the greedy loan sharks of casinos that strong arm tribes into only having them as a choice.

    Lender laws are usually non existent on tribal lands. On the upside Native American casinos help the very needy and poor tribal members so they don't die of starvation or lack of affordable housing. It pays for educational costs and health care for many.

    David

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  8. I was wondering, the blacklist has meant a lot to me as well, I just recently discovered it, what I'd like to know is where can I read and get my hands on some of the scripts from 2007 - 2009. I don't want to use Mediafire or any unsafe sites. Is there anywhere that I can go and find the scripts for free: I have an interest for The Voice, Fuckbuddies and the Phantom Limb. These are a few, I want to read more on these ideas to improve my own stories.

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  9. Errr, where did you get the idea that these scripts have been "passed over" by producers? This is simply a list of scripts that, at the time of voting, have not yet been produced. Most of them HAVE sold and many of them are in pre-production. You misunderstand the list. It's simply our a list of favorite scripts, as judged by Hollywood readers, assistants, and so forth.

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  10. Ditto on the above comment by Anonymous. Please continue to do more research instead of writing blanket statements that may lead the aspiring writer down the wrong path. Thanks.
    By citing major flaws as the reason these scripts are unproduced is misleading.

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